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Thursday, March 19, 2009

Umeed


Andheron ki god mein chamakta ek tara
Lehron ke bawandar mein tinke ka sahara
Zindagi ki bheed mein ek apna sa saaya
Gheebat ki aandhi pe insaaf ki chaaya
Sannaton ki bheed mein ek dabi si aahat
Ghamon ke sailaab mein halki si muskurahat


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14 eulogies: on "Umeed"

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

Beautiful...esp the line 'sannaton ki bheed ,mein dabi si aahat'...what's 'gheebat'?...too much hindi ho gaya...but proud to have deciphered the rest :)

Arunima said...

Wow dear....good one!
Gr8 analogy.
hey bt vat does "Gheebat" means!
wait lemme guess does it mean...crime

Vyzz said...

Ghamon ke sailaab mein halki si muskurahat

wow..really nice ya...so poetry has got your tongue..nice nice..

keep it up..

cheers

vyo

comfortably numb said...

@Akshaya
thts my fav line too:)
"gheebat" literally means backbiting but is used here as an analogy for all vices.

mixedblessings89 said...

Wow.
Just... wow.

I can write alright in English, but this really is the real thing, isn't it? Even translated, it'll be beautiful...

Wow.

comfortably numb said...

@Aditi
the language hardly matters...it's all about expressing those feelings and conveying the message.
thnx:)

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