a single glimpse is what I aspire for...I long for
to cherish forever...to be my redemption in the darkness
searched the seas...foraged the lands
seeked you in nature's perfection
in the blooming of the buds...in the soothing of the wind
glistening of the sand...calmness of the water
looked for you on the horizon with the rising sun
waited for you in the twilight's shadow
probed the twinkling of the stars
gave pursuit to the moon's golden beam
weary and tired...I give up hope
closing my eyes as despondency grows
behold...the inner eye triumphs where all else failed
I have the sight...fortitude prevailed
you are within me...I now understandforever...for always, holding my hand
24 eulogies: on "With Me...Forever"
awesome!!
:)
lovely lines, tragic..melancholic..so right..
keep writing and one day publish a book, im ur customer..hehe
ohh,just too beautiful
fell in love with the last lines
@vyzz
write a book...well all I know is that at least one copy will definitely sell now:D
@anonymous
thnkz and welcome
but u cud have revealed urself!!!
illusion of love...
yes dude forever...jus believe!!!
Me in you1
and u in me!!
that's the way it is, My love
Two souls united
as if Braided
:-) Saim is in love.. who is d Lady?
lovely poem..
the lines...
'you are within me...I now understand
forever...for always, holding my hand' are beautifully expressed...
wow!well written friend. :) Has a combination of pleasure and pain. Isnt life just like tht!
Doppelganger!
Nicely done ... often what you're looking for is right there within you :)
Love is often the reason for alot of pain later on...but eventually love finds it's way and teaches u how to find pleasure in it all somehow.
beautiful verse CN!
Keshi.
@neha
probably yes!!!
@mayank
some say though that forever is a lie!!!
@rat
nicely put...
have always been in love dear...in love with love
n of course there is Maria:D
@Charmed one
thnkz a ton:)
@ria
thnkz
yep...life is very much like tht!!!
@akshaya
yes...its somtimes in front of u and u hardly realise it!!!
@keshi
even the pain has a lilting pleasure to it...love teaches us to appreciate that pain as well!!!
poem=lovely!!!
love=*pukes* :P
@trinaa
thnkz
I always say this...its not tht love stinks, its mostly the ppl who practice it in a stinky way!!!
hiiii saim, back after a long tyme!
love teh inner eye- i think it's the soul saviour at times when i'm down in dumps!
loved those lines..
"you are within me...I now understand
forever...for always, holding my hand"
sometimes when i look back at those awesome relationships that went all wrong, these are the lines my inner eye proclaims, n helps me SMILE :)
true :)
Keshi.
@jane
welcome bak...whr hv ya been???
thnkz for liking it and yeah everythng we did once was an xperience tht v must cherish even though things may not hv worked out!!!
cum more often and write!!!
thank god for the way my name is spelt, for a second, reading the name i went ookkhhahaayy!!!!and well i am not sharapova anyway!!hehehehe
nice poetry.
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