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Sunday, February 01, 2009

With Me...Forever


a single glimpse is what I aspire for...I long for
to cherish forever...to be my redemption in the darkness
searched the seas...foraged the lands
seeked you in nature's perfection
in the blooming of the buds...in the soothing of the wind
glistening of the sand...calmness of the water
looked for you on the horizon with the rising sun
waited for you in the twilight's shadow
probed the twinkling of the stars
gave pursuit to the moon's golden beam
weary and tired...I give up hope
closing my eyes as despondency grows
behold...the inner eye triumphs where all else failed
I have the sight...fortitude prevailed
you are within me...I now understand
forever...for always, holding my hand


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24 eulogies: on "With Me...Forever"

Vyzz said...

awesome!!

:)

lovely lines, tragic..melancholic..so right..

keep writing and one day publish a book, im ur customer..hehe

comfortably numb said...

@vyzz
write a book...well all I know is that at least one copy will definitely sell now:D

Charmed One! said...

lovely poem..
the lines...
'you are within me...I now understand
forever...for always, holding my hand' are beautifully expressed...

Ria said...

wow!well written friend. :) Has a combination of pleasure and pain. Isnt life just like tht!

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

Doppelganger!
Nicely done ... often what you're looking for is right there within you :)

Keshi said...

Love is often the reason for alot of pain later on...but eventually love finds it's way and teaches u how to find pleasure in it all somehow.

beautiful verse CN!

Keshi.

comfortably numb said...

@rat
nicely put...
have always been in love dear...in love with love
n of course there is Maria:D

comfortably numb said...

@keshi
even the pain has a lilting pleasure to it...love teaches us to appreciate that pain as well!!!

comfortably numb said...

@trinaa
thnkz
I always say this...its not tht love stinks, its mostly the ppl who practice it in a stinky way!!!

rantravereflect/ jane said...

hiiii saim, back after a long tyme!

love teh inner eye- i think it's the soul saviour at times when i'm down in dumps!

loved those lines..
"you are within me...I now understand
forever...for always, holding my hand"

sometimes when i look back at those awesome relationships that went all wrong, these are the lines my inner eye proclaims, n helps me SMILE :)

comfortably numb said...

@jane
welcome bak...whr hv ya been???
thnkz for liking it and yeah everythng we did once was an xperience tht v must cherish even though things may not hv worked out!!!
cum more often and write!!!

Whats in a name.......... said...

thank god for the way my name is spelt, for a second, reading the name i went ookkhhahaayy!!!!and well i am not sharapova anyway!!hehehehe
nice poetry.

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