Come to me, come give me pain
Of dreams unfulfilled and things not gained
Make me relive this agony of a life
Find me a place where I can feel it
Over and again, clamp me so I cannot
Run away from it, bind me please
To unbearable and lasting pain
Alas, the senses have left me though
Bound to memories I may still be
Lilting pain and anguish I see
Yet it does not hit me at all, and
Nothing do I feel, do me a favor whoever is near
Unsheathe this cloak and shred it
My friend, I no more want to
Be comfortably numb
18 eulogies: on "Comfortably Numb"
wow!!thats a nice acrostic. I wonder i could write something like that :)
dark n beautiful write saim...
luved it..
even i dont want you to be comfortably numb.. my lord of poetry.. lovely poem.. and so beautifully penned..
wish nothing of these happens 2 u, and u stay comfortable- but not numb any day! beautiful namesake!
@Rockstarbabu
welcome dude!!!
@Ria
for sure...give it a shot:)
@Arun
thnx mate!!!
@Kaj
I know k u dun want me to be but I am:(
ab kya karen???
@Diya
thnk u for ur wishes lekin this is my reality!!!
guess what CN...Im comfortably numb..hv been so for a long time..and now I've reached a stage that I cant seem to get it all bak..what I was b4...I cant even rem.
This one's a beautiful piece CN. I loved it.
Keshi.
"do me a favor whoever is near
Unsheathe this cloak and shred it"
Loved these lines.
Awesome poem.
@Keshi
u mirror my state of mind Keshi...hopefully we can both get out of this!!!
@Sugar Cube
thnx dear!!!
welcome to my space:)
can i mourn with you?
i dont wanna stay comfortably numb! i wanna bleed!
dude...whts happening?..be happy!!
@Seher
u sure can, but I dun want u 2 mourn...dun stay comfortably numb, stay comfortable!!!
@Pratap
am happy mate, seriously!!!
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