Him:-Khwaab aksar dhundle par jaate hain
Her:-Sacchai kya hai...aur kuch nahin
Him:-Har khwaab ki taabeer na ho to accha hai
Her:-Sapnon ki duniya mein kho kar kahin aap
Him:-Saamne khade hain jo unse hum puchte hain
Her:-Haqeeqat hain hum....fasaanon mein nahin
Sacchai ke aks mein oojhal ho jaate hain
Her:-Sacchai kya hai...aur kuch nahin
Bas ek khwaab jiski tabeer ho gayi ho
Him:-Har khwaab ki taabeer na ho to accha hai
In aankhon mein aksar bure sapne bhi baste hain
Her:-Sapnon ki duniya mein kho kar kahin aap
Apnon ke ehsaason ki ghaflat na kijiye
Him:-Saamne khade hain jo unse hum puchte hain
Sach ho ya khuli aankhon mein khwaab base hain
Her:-Haqeeqat hain hum....fasaanon mein nahin
Apne se hain hum...begaanon mein nahin
P.S. Concept plagiarized from Kajal:)
24 eulogies: on "Bait Baazi"
lovely....and u truly knw hw to play with words. :)
lagta hai har line mein kuch khas ho jaise :D
beyond my understanding:D
mohabbat wo kiya kare, samajh aata hai!
par naam hamara badnaam hua, ye ajeeb hai!! :P
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too good Saim.. After mayz, i think you are inspiring a lot of poetry in pretty recently.. :) ufffffff kamaal hai.. :)
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andhero mein na jaane ye kaisi roshni si hai!
jabki wo chirag wahaan bujha bujha sa hai!!
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lafzo ki ye be-imaani to dekhiye!
lab hile nahi, par shayari ho gayi!!
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i guess i will stop write here!! :) big hug!
if only i knew hindi or what is this language
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chriz
well done and beautiful words there.... :)
high usage of decorative romanticism.. its really tough to express which u have done elegantly.. well done..
@Ria
thnx a lot dear:)
@Neha
koshish to kuch aisi hi thi...kaamyaabi aapke lafzon ne de di:)
@Broca
sum day I may do an English rendezvous on the same lines:)
@Kajal
Mohabbat ka muqaam kuch is darja bataya aapne
Ke aashiqui mein mubtala hona hi para hamein :D
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am honoured...so much I cannot even express, to think of me inspiring others...wow:)
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Charaaghon mein kahan dam tha in andheron ko mitaane ka
Ye roshni to mere sulagte dil ki badaulat hai
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Shayari labon ki mohtaaj kahan hai
Bas dil-e-khyaal roshan rakhiye
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I hope u nvr stop writing:)
cheers 2 ya:)
@Chriz
it's Hindi n Urdu ka mixture:)
I may do something on the same like in English, so wait for that if u can:)
@Raka
thnx dear:)
@Mainak
seriously mate, it's just okayish...stop flattering moi:)
that was ...int ka jawaab patthar se..uff...ek ek teer nishaane pe laga ustaad..maan gaye aapko.. too good!! :D
@Kajal
nopes...it's more like phoolon ka jawab kaliyon se:)
no place for int n patthars in Shayari:D
thnx:)
waise hum bahut pehle hi maan chuke hain aapko:)
aashiqui ki uljhanon ko suljhaana hoga bada mushkil !
ulte kadam laut ja aye aashiq, kuchh na hoga haasil !!
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dil tera sulga hai aye aashiq, shayad koi armaan khaak hone ko hai !
jala jala sa ek aarzoo ek mera bhi hai jo ab shayad raakh hone ko hai !!
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dil-e-khayal ki bhi daastaan ajeeb hai !
dard se uth ke dard mein hi khaak hota hai!
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i don't know if i am making sense.. but i am having a blast ... :D
aashiqui ki uljhanon ko suljhaana hoga bada mushkil !
ulte kadam laut ja aye aashiq, kuchh na hoga haasil !!
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dil tera sulga hai aye aashiq, shayad koi armaan khaak hone ko hai !
jala jala sa ek aarzoo ek mera bhi hai jo ab shayad raakh hone ko hai !!
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dil-e-khayal ki bhi daastaan ajeeb hai !
dard se uth ke dard mein hi khaak hota hai!
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i don't know if i am making sense.. but i am having a blast ... :D
I didn't understand somewords of Urdu, but the rest was very :)
huh??? wat???
main apne last comment ka reply padhne aayi thi.. :(
@Kajal
Aashiq ke hauslon ka na le imtihaan aye zaalim
Kuch aur na hasil karna hai usse ek zakhm-e-dil ke siva
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Sulagte dil ke angaaron se goonji yeh sada hai
Armaanon ka naseeb hai raakh mein shaamil hona
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Dard se hi dil-e-khyaal ki hayat hai
Jo dard na ho to shayri ki bhi maut hai
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u r making perfect sense:)
sorry for the delay in replying...put it down to my IPL infatuation:D
@Aditi
thnx dear:)
@Mayank
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