Andheron ki god mein chamakta ek tara
Lehron ke bawandar mein tinke ka sahara
Zindagi ki bheed mein ek apna sa saaya
Gheebat ki aandhi pe insaaf ki chaaya
Sannaton ki bheed mein ek dabi si aahat
Ghamon ke sailaab mein halki si muskurahat
Home through my eyez Umeed
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Beautiful...esp the line 'sannaton ki bheed ,mein dabi si aahat'...what's 'gheebat'?...too much hindi ho gaya...but proud to have deciphered the rest :)
Wow dear....good one!
Gr8 analogy.
hey bt vat does "Gheebat" means!
wait lemme guess does it mean...crime
very beautiful n touching .. hope your aunt is feeling better ...
very beautiful
Ghamon ke sailaab mein halki si muskurahat
wow..really nice ya...so poetry has got your tongue..nice nice..
keep it up..
cheers
vyo
beautifully written!!
@Akshaya
thts my fav line too:)
"gheebat" literally means backbiting but is used here as an analogy for all vices.
@Arunima
thnx...
for "gheebat's" meaning..c earlier comment.
@Charmed one
thnx...aunt is still the same though:(
@Moi
thnx:)
@Vyzz
just my silly attempt @ poetry yaar:D
1st time I have done urdu/hindi poetry.
@Ria
thnx a ton:)
Wow.
Just... wow.
I can write alright in English, but this really is the real thing, isn't it? Even translated, it'll be beautiful...
Wow.
@Aditi
the language hardly matters...it's all about expressing those feelings and conveying the message.
thnx:)
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